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oristarA
 
Reply Mon 10 Jan, 2011 06:57 am
Objective To investigate the management measure to improve the quality of basic care in community hospitals. Methods Review and analysis on the quality of basic care (QBC), nursing satisfaction (NS) and nursing complaint (NC) before and after carrying out the Basic Care Quality Control Strategy Based on the Principle of Humane Care. Results Carrying out the control strategy has led to significant improvement (P＞0.05) of QBC and NS. Conclusion Basic Care Quality Control Strategy is an effective way to lay a sound foundation for basic care.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jan, 2011 07:09 am
@oristarA,
You should probably change "management measure" to "management method." "Review and analysis on the quality . . . " should be "Review and analysis of the quality . . . " You have way too many capitalized words--this is English, not German. " . . . the Basic Care Quality Control Strategy based on the principle of humane care." Otherwise, i think it's fine.
oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jan, 2011 08:00 am
@Setanta,
Thanks.
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McTag
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jan, 2011 04:23 pm

Review and analysis of the quality of basic care....
oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jan, 2011 08:46 pm
@McTag,
McTag wrote:


Review and analysis of the quality of basic care....


In my first version I did write of "of", not "on". But when I checked some usage examples who always used "on" to follow "analysis", I changed it. However, I have to admit they use "on" in titles only.

So please tell me why.

laughoutlood
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jan, 2011 01:25 am
@oristarA,
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So please tell me why.


A probability of greater than 5% would be classed as significant.
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McTag
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jan, 2011 02:32 am
@oristarA,

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So please tell me why.



If you analyse something, you're doing an analysis of it. That's simple and plain English (which I prefer!).

"On" can be used in a similar way: Example-

Give me the latest figures on the banking crisis.

There, it means "about, concerning".
oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jan, 2011 08:05 am
@McTag,
McTag wrote:


Quote:
So please tell me why.



If you analyse something, you're doing an analysis of it. That's simple and plain English (which I prefer!).

"On" can be used in a similar way: Example-

Give me the latest figures on the banking crisis.

There, it means "about, concerning".


Thanks.

The examples that I got from scientific articles about the usage of "analysis on":

1.analysis on manifolds

2.Analysis on CBD

3.Analysis on WCDMA Capacity

4.Congnitive Analysis on Abbreviation

5.Analysis on Crepe Design

6.harmonic analysis on groups

7.Analysis on Cultural Macao

8.Analysis on Search Engine

9.Elementary Analysis on Jeans Market

10.Analysis on Kuhn-Tucker Condition




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oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jan, 2011 08:07 am
Got 13,100,000 hits in Google searching about "analysis on".
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laughoutlood
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jan, 2011 06:11 am
@oristarA,
Significantly, the dogs were barking mad at the trees obscuring the forest with (P>0.95).
oristarA
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jan, 2011 07:05 am
@laughoutlood,
laughoutlood wrote:

Significantly, the dogs were barking mad at the trees obscuring the forest with (P>0.95).


I agree.
But that is not my article. I just took charge of the translation. Very Happy

laughoutlood
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jan, 2011 07:11 am
@oristarA,
which part of the abstract did i edit with my previous post?
oristarA
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jan, 2011 08:19 am
@laughoutlood,
So small a part that can be neglected altogether. Very Happy
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