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PennyChan
 
Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2010 12:22 am
Such small-scale gestures could shock the world, what if a big move instead?

Who can help me to improve the sentence?
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roger
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2010 12:43 am
@PennyChan,
Such small scale gestures could shock the world. What if a big move were made instead?
PennyChan
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2010 12:45 am
@roger,
Thanks!
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Fido
 
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Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2010 07:13 am
@PennyChan,
PennyChan wrote:

Such small-scale gestures could shock the world, what if a big move instead?

Who can help me to improve the sentence?

IF such a small gesture could shock the world, what effect would a larger scale action have???
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