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If anyone is willing to read this draft...

 
 
Caldus
 
Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 02:24 pm
If anyone is willing to read this draft for my history class, then I would greatly appreciate any comments or questions:

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Nonviolent direct action can be defined as any nonviolent means of bringing about social change. It can involve marches, mass demonstrations, sit-ins, boycotts, and civil disobedience. During the 1950's and 1960's, Whites denied Blacks fundamental civil rights such as decent housing, adequate education, and the right to vote. In this time period, many of the shows on television presented Blacks being severely beaten with sticks, fire hoses, and dogs. Many cities in the South, especially Birmingham, Alabama, enforced segregation and unjust laws. Considered one of the greatest political strategists of all time, Martin Luther King Jr. took action against the racists of the South and compelled them using his non-violent methods to accept equality. He demonstrated that non-violent direct action could be a powerful way to promote liberty and equality for blacks in the South. He used the power of love for God against his enemies. He influenced the South by putting them under political, economic, and moral pressure. His compassionate speeches gave Blacks a sense of hope for equality. He stressed that they should not surrender their right to protest in order to allow opportunity to be similarly distributed among the races.
The lack of power that Blacks had before the 1960's was similar to the women's lack of power during the Puritan era. Carol Karlsen finds in her research that Puritan clergy in seventeenth century Massachusetts believed that women in general were witches. In the King era, state governments in the South did not actively participate in ending racism because they were in favor of segregation. For example, in the mid 1600's, Katherine Harrison, the wife of a wealthy landowner, petitioned for redress. The court ignored her petition. Harrison lost her liberty because of the death of her rich husband. Her husband had given her his entire estate and thus she disrupted the Puritan inheritance system which was designed to keep men in power. Both Harrison and King are treated unfairly as a result of a gender or race hierarchy in their communities. When her community feared that she had the same amount of wealth as her husband did, her protection was lost and she was sent to jail. Similarly, when Whites feared that King had the ability to restore the racial balance in America, he was sent to jail.
A century after the witch hunts, the Declaration of Independence promoted development of personal freedom and emphasized that "all men are created equal." Despite expressing John Locke's ideas of religious tolerance, right of rebellion, and popular sovereignty, the Declaration of Independence did not extend these liberties to Blacks before the 1960's. Written in 1787, the Constitution followed ideas involving a strong central government because the authors believed that the government would be more stable if its powers were extended over a large amount of land. However, it was very ambiguous and evasive about the issue of slavery because the authors feared that the Union would not be preserved if issues of slavery were brought up during the time. After the Constitution was ratified, the "silence" of slavery became a threat to liberty, equality, and power for Blacks because the issue of slavery became worse throughout the 1800's. Under this "silence," the Founding Fathers feared that the Union would be destroyed because if the slavery issue was clearly resolved, then it would be nearly impossible to ratify the Constitution. In 1790, Quaker delegates petitioned for the abolishment of African slave trade. It was difficult for the Founding Fathers to ignore this petition because Benjamin Franklin, whose sense of timing was essential for the preservation of the Union, signed it. James Madison, whose strategy of silently banishing petitions failed to work this time, believed that the issue not only had the potential to destroy the Union, but to destroy the Virginia planter class. Meanwhile, others argued that freeing slaves would cause even more problems such as overpopulation and integration of whites and blacks in society. Madison was able to prove to the Congress that they did not have the power to interfere with the emancipation of slaves. Even George Washington, who was considered by Joseph Ellis as the "supreme Founding Father," believed that the ongoing debate must be terminated. Roughly two hundred years later, Blacks still suffered from this "silence." King decides that he must act fast or this "silence" may last forever. Both Franklin and King knew that self-preservation for Blacks would be lost forever unless they confront the issue ruthlessly.
The opposite idea of the critical proposition of human equality was the antebellum idea of the Slave Power. Followers of the Slave Power believed that slavery was a normative principle whose institution must be defended. During the ensuing Civil War, Abraham Lincoln signed the Emancipation Proclamation, which allowed slaves to enter society. At Gettysburg in 1863, Lincoln attempted to revise what the Founding Fathers instituted during the American Revolution. Garry Wills discusses how Lincoln was able to place the proposition of equality that the Declaration of Independence stressed as an essential principle of the Constitution. His way of thinking was abstract in that he never referred to any specific people or places in his famous Gettysburg Address speech in 1863. This way of thinking influenced many people. For example, the United States became a singular noun. He stressed that a group of people addressed its task which was assigned by an accepted proposition. About a century later, King attempted to revise the ultimate proposition of equality once more. He used Christianity, reason, and love in order to reinforce the idea that all people, including blacks, were all "primary values."
After the Civil War, Congress proposed amendments to change race relations in America. The 13th amendment stated that "slavery is forever dead." The 14th amendment provided equal rights for all citizens. The 15th amendment gave ex-slaves the right to vote. However, the tide of racial equality went into a sharp decline when the "Slaughterhouse Cases" occurred in 1873. A few decades later, Jim Crow laws and Plessy vs. Ferguson case upheld the legality of segregation. In his dissenting Plessy opinion, Justice John Harlan stated that the "separate but equal doctrine" was causing Blacks to feel inferior. One of the objectives of King's nonviolent campaigns was to expose the evils of segregation. In his "Freedom Rally in Cobo Hall" speech, King compared segregation to an alternative form of slavery that is as morally wrong as it was legally wrong. Echoing Harlan, King argued that it created a race hierarchy.
At the turn of the twentieth century, Booker T. Washington, known as an "accommodationist" implemented a strategy of "gospel of work and money," where Blacks could accumulate wealth. In his "Atlanta Compromise" speech in 1895, he stressed that Blacks were to accept their inferiority and to try to uplift themselves through industrial education. Washington's strategy was criticized by historian and revisionist W.E.B. Du Bois, who argued that three things happened as a result of Washington's program: Blacks were disfranchised, a "legal creation of a distinct status of civil inferiority for the Negro" was established, and higher educational institutions were defaced.
Considering Washington's program a failure, Du Bois believed that there should be a group known as the "Talented Tenth." This was Du Bois' reference to the Blacks who had as much potential as Du Bois in respecting their own race and getting others to respect their race. The "Talented Tenth" would lead the race. Du Bois' objective was to provide Blacks with a sense of dignity and to teach them elevated ideals of life. By freeing the Blacks from ignorance and love for money, they would be sure how to cry for their freedom. One drawback of Du Bois' strategy was that it did not expose the evils of the South because the only action that Blacks were taking was that they were trying to educate themselves. In the "Freedom Rally in Cobo Hall" speech, King described how the White community told him to "slow up." Just as Du Bois knew that action needed to be taken now, King addressed their comment in the same way. He said that Blacks must continue to gain their liberty because gradualism would result in "stand-stillism."
In the 1950's, many states in the South implemented a strategy commonly known as "massive resistance," where they demanded that the Blacks comply with the law no matter how unjust it may be to them. Powerful Whites promised brutal retaliation if the Blacks tried to disrupt society. The "massive resistance" of the South slowed implementation of the Brown vs. Board of Education decision in 1954 to desegregate schools. Southern Congressmen signed the "Southern Manifesto," which declared the Brown vs. Board of Education decision as "contrary to the established law and the Constitution." In order to expose and destroy "massive resistance," King implemented a strategy of a nonviolent direct action. King depended on publicity and government intervention through his nonviolent campaigns. He once admitted to the inherent paradox of his nonviolent campaigns in that the Black's "soul force" caused physical force from the racists. Although he preached nonviolence, King realized that the violence caused by the racists' reaction forced the federal government to intervene. Thus, the order of these demonstrations was the execution of nonviolent direct action, violent reaction of the racists, demand for government intervention from "Americans of conscience," and then intervention of the government.
The racist democracy of the South was economically and socially flawed. In an interview, King listed the four main flaws of America as racism, poverty, militarism, and materialism. He explained that these flaws have been evident for centuries because the economy was unevenly distributed. Professor Thomas Dye observes that racial inequality originated from many different reasons during the 1950's such as poverty caused by the period of slavery, family disorganization, urbanization, industrialization, and education.
King demonstrated nonviolent direct action to be the most effective means of bringing about social change because it put the South under extreme political, economic, and moral pressure. Blacks would not be able to gain freedom through political action. They were denied the right to vote. Using violence would certainly not prove to be effective means of destroying the evils of the South let alone expose them. King's reason was that White supremacists and Black supremacists were both attacking the ideals of Christianity. He stated that they have "lost faith in America."0
King had borrowed many of his ideas from Mahatma Gandi, another strong advocate of nonviolence. One of Gandi's points that King emphasized against supporters of violence was that if people were all important, then any technique for social change cannot result in the violation of any person. He also followed Gandi's notion that you must defeat the enemy by making them realize their weaknesses.0 The emergence of King's beliefs was not only because he studied Gandi's philosophy, but because of his study of personalistic philosophy while attending Boston University. After struggling through various metaphysical and theological explorations through his studies, he became a very democratic person. He believed that people were of infinite metaphysical value and that property and profit were two things that were destroying democracy in America.
By the 1960's, some members of the Black Power movement argued that in order to fix the corrupted democracy of the South, they must use violence. They believed this because the white supremacists were using violence. King was enraged by this and responded by stating that they are assuming that all hope was lost. King emphasized that nonviolence is supposed to be spiritual despite that it is passive physically. He argued that nonviolent resistance was not supposed to be directed toward any person unlike violent resistance. Violent supporters also argued that nonviolence was simply ineffective in actually changing society. King responded by saying that if nonviolence was ineffective, then "honesty, goodwill, integrity, virtue, and justice" were ineffective as well. In King's "The Birth of a New Nation" speech in 1957, he mentioned how the British government was unable to stop Prime Minister Nkrumah and his supporters from stopping the colonialism of the Gold Coast during the 1940's and 1950's. Nkrumah uses nonviolent methods to bring his people together. He united a group so large that the British realized that they could not rule the Gold Coast.
In terms of achieving civil rights, there are many instances where nonviolent direct action has been proven to be the best answer. The crisis that occurred at Birmingham, Alabama in the early 1960's is evidence for this. During this time, Birmingham's black churches were being bombed and segregation was heavily enforced. In addition, Eugene "Bull" Conner made nonviolent direct action illegal in the city. As a result, King implemented a campaign in Birmingham known as "Project Confrontation." He eventually violated a court order and thus committed his first act of civil disobedience. He was then sent to jail, where he would publish his famous "Letter from Birmingham Jail."0 The "Letter from Birmingham Jail" created a crisis in the city. Right behind the "I Have a Dream" speech, the letter was considered one of the most significant documents in American history. King wrote the letter in response to "An Appeal for Law and Order of Common Sense" which was written by white clergymen who declared that Project C was "unwise and untimely." It was so successful because it clearly presented King's goals and strategies. In the letter, he justified his act of civil disobedience by stating that John Locke as well as the Founding Fathers believed that if a law was unjust to God or simply degraded human personality, then that law can be challenged. In addition to justifying his actions in Birmingham, King described succinct steps for executing nonviolent direct action campaigns. First, in order to determine whether injustice really existed in any situation, knowledge had to be gained about the situation. Without proper evidence, the Blacks would be fighting for virtually nothing. If injustice existed, negotiations must be attempted. If the negotiations fail, then the Blacks must go through a process known as "self-purification" to relieve the bitterness toward their enemies and to prepare to face violent racists. Finally, nonviolent direct action is taken.
The order in which these actions were taken was so effective because mass demonstrations can lead to government intervention or lead to successful negotiations. For example, once a crisis was provoked in Birmingham as a result of the letter, negotiations were made. Everyone agreed that eating facilities would be desegregated and that blacks would be able to be hired by businesses and industries.
King founded the Southern Christian Leadership Conference, which coordinated direct action campaigns. It was a "faith operation," which lacked bureaucratic behavior and relied on Christian inspiration. Political action and community organization were two alternative strategies that the SCLC considered as opposed to nonviolence. Political action was immediately thrown out of the question because the Blacks received virtually none of the benefits of political participation and they had no chance of creating a coalition with the government.
The Student Nonviolent Coordinating Committee, which was formed by college students as a result of the "Freedom Rides" and sit-ins that occurred in 1961, argued that community organization had a more firm basis for bringing about social change. They believed that community organization was better because nonviolent direct action left the Blacks disorganized, exhausted, demoralized, and vulnerable. Adam Fairclough places community organization to the same level as separatism because community organization merely showed hopelessness in any situation.
Relying on nonviolence and the SCLC, King was able to defeat white southern "political machines" just as Willie Talos did in All the King's Men. The political machine refers to a single person or a group of people that control the political machinery in a city or state. When Talos found out that he was being used to split-up the votes in an election, he realized that politics is not about a clash of ideals, but a clash of willpower and manipulation. He manipulated the "political machines" by taking advantage of the corrupt business of Southern politics. Similarly, King took advantage of America's corrupted democracy. The main goal of his strategy was to expose the corruption of the South. Both King and Talos were successful. While King sacrificed himself by violating a court order, Talos "digged dirt" on his opponents. Talos defined "digging dirt" as doing "good" using illegal methods. In one scene in the book, Jack Burden, Talos' assistant, was ordered to find "dirt" on Judge Irwin because he supported one of Talos' political enemies. While Burden was tracing Irwin's past, he met Lily Mae Littlepaugh, who was the sister of a man who committed suicide because Irwin preceded him as counsel for the American Electric Power Company. Burden learned from Miss Littlepaugh that Irwin accepted a bribe from the company in order to save his plantation. He also learned that Governor Stanton, who was governor of the state during the time, illegally protected Irwin when Mortimer Littlepaugh reported Irwin's illegal activity to him. The power of mass rally was evident among King and Willie. As a result of exposing the corruption of the South, Willie gained many supporters for his cause. Similarly, King persuaded many Blacks to join his cause through his high quality speeches that reached to his audience. However, King's methods seemed to be better than Talos' because King's acts of civil disobedience did not necessarily disrupt order or cause confusion in the cities he campaigned in while Talos goes as far as using blackmail and trickery to defeat his opponents.
To overcome the evils of the South, the SCLC and King implement the strategy of nonviolent direct action. The SCLC admitted that their success depended on White's violent reaction as well as the press. As a result of King's demonstrations, the Civil Rights Act of 1964 as well as the Voting Rights Act of 1965 were two things that Blacks were granted by the federal government. The Civil Rights Act declared any public discrimination of races as illegal while the Voting Rights Act protected the rights of black voters. Proving Du Bois' point, King was a member of the "Talented Tenth" who attended Boston University, where he studied personalistic philosophy and the essential principles of Ghandi's philosophy of nonviolence. The power of King's knowledge allowed him to convince even supporters of violence that their methods were only making the situation worse. He took action against the South by using his ability to expose the inherent racism, poverty, militarism, and materialism of America. Knowing that action was needed to be taken soon, King went as far as to commit acts of civil disobedience in order to bring about change in society. The reason King was successful in bringing about social, political, and economic change was because he knew what power really meant. In his "Where Do We Go From Here?" speech, he defines power as "the ability to achieve purpose." Thus, the reason that the racists were unsuccessful in preventing social change was because they used power incorrectly.


Please tell me what you think. The paper is supposed to analyze the themes of liberty, equality, and power while discussing six books we read in class:

The Devil in the Shape of a Woman by Carol Karlsen
Founding Brothers by Joseph Ellis
Lincoln at Gettysburg by Garry Wills
The Souls of Black Folk by W.E.B. Du Bois
All the King's Men by Robert Penn Warren
A Call to Conscience by Clayborne Carson
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 05:54 pm
Sorry, but I usually leave full length novels for summer...
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Wy
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 06:22 pm
Off the top of my head...

It's hard to read, partly because of mixed tenses. Check through it and make sure each part of each sentence matches...

The paragraphs seem confused. For a moment, I thought Garry Wills gave the Gettysburg Address...

Some sentences seem contradictory to fact: Similarly, when Whites feared that King had the ability to restore the racial balance in America, he was sent to jail. Restore? When was there previous racial balance?
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 06:50 pm
It's hard to read for me because I tend to dismiss (sorry!) something that is typed straight down the page, a long one at that, without a space between each paragraph. People who just rant tend to do that, and my mind has a shutoff valve for it. This of course is not a comment on the content.

We have several people quite knowledgeable about history at this site and they may be able to give you some serious commentary.

I haven't read your piece yet, but I will this evening.
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Asherman
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 08:04 pm
Though you have obviously read the required reading, and kept good notes, this essay isn't likely to get better than a C+, or B-. What's wrong with it?

First, there is no clear thesis statement. What is it that you are trying to say? You wander along for 3,162 words, but at the end of that I couldn't figure out exactly what you wanted me to think. You didn't seem have any new ideas, or reach any conclusions after recounting a long history of ....? Though you outlined in pretty good order ideas and conditions correctly, it seems that you haven't thought much beyond a rather simplistic reading of those events.

The facts are in some cases not quite correctly stated, and tend to give a warped notion of history. I'd like to know as a reader why you believe these simplistic notions to be worthy of my attention. Remember your reader and what will keep them glued to your story as you write.

The grammar is in places confused, and overly complicated. 17% of your sentences are passive, and that is almost three times what one would expect in "good" writing. Your sentences are too long; average sentences should be around 14 words, and you average out at 19.8 words to a sentence. The result is that the Flesch Reading Ease score is 39.8, and the higher the score the more difficult the text is to read and understand. Reading Ease should stay down below 20. Most good writing is pitched at a Flesch Grade Level of about 8, but your score is 12. Now, I have graduate level degrees and over fifty years of experience reading difficult and complex text dealing with complicated matters. I had difficulty in understanding you, and even more trouble remaining interested enough to finish the piece. That is hard criticism, but it is well meant.

Trim your writing down. Use simple declarative sentences that are hard to misread. Clearly tell the reader what you intend to show, then tell them that in simple, easy to understand language. Keep your paragraphs short (yours average 13.2 sentences to the paragraph). The first sentence of the paragraph is either a connective to the last paragraph, or the central idea of the new paragraph. Paragraphs over 5 sentences often bog down and wander off into the cornfield. Edit, Edit, Edit. Trim away adjective and terms that have multiple meanings. Check each sentence to be sure no one can read it any way other than you intended. Writing is a lot of work.

If you don't separate paragraphs by a space, then at least indent the first sentence of each paragraph.

I commend you on seeking out the view points of uninvolved people. That shows you are willing to learn. Try again. Post and lets see if you don't do much better.
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Caldus
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 08:38 pm
Thank you everyone for your feedback.

Asherman, the point of my paper was to prove that nonviolent direct action is the best way to bring about social change. Our professor wanted us to analyze the themes of liberty, equality, and power while proving the thesis. So that is why it may seem a little too much information than what is required. Thank you for mentioning that my thesis was never directly stated. I have been editing this paper for a while and I realized that I deleted my thesis statement while editing my introduction (because my teacher wanted me to focus on liberty, equality, and power for the introduction and conclusion).

What particular parts of the paper did you guys not understand? Just the whole paper in general?

I apologize for my writing style. I am a logic person, so I am meant to do math and program all day rather than write papers. ; )

Also, how can I go about finding these passive sentences? I know next to nothing about grammar, lol (can you tell? ; ) ). Is there some kind of program I can use that will automatically detect them?
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Wy
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 09:06 pm
Asherman, I am so glad you explained! The things you point out were the points that troubled me, but you explain it so much better.

MS Word's grammar checker will flag passive sentences. Word has functions that will check the items Asherman mentioned too, words per sentence, paragraph, etc.

Yes, please, let us see it when you've edited it.
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makemeshiver33
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 09:23 pm
Asherman pretty much nailed it, but I have a few tips too...

For Starters...you mentioned 17 different people. Simplify it.

Secondly, you mentioned....a different number of groups and laws. (lost me there)

Your have us going back and forth from the 50's and 60's to the Declaration of Independence.

It is confusing, but apparently you done your homework reading.

Another tip...Each time you start another subject, start another paragraph.

Make sure you paper has its thesis statement in the first paragraph and some back ground information.

Then develop each supporting paragraph., list points that develop the main idea of your essay with the facts, details or examples of it.

Focus on the main idea.

Then summarize it.....

I found it easier for me to do essays if I gather all my information WHICH YOU DID!! Write on each subject separtely, lay them out and put them in order of events. Then rewrite it, editing as I do, or adding in more information if I left something out. But leading each paragraph that I end into the next point. Then ending it with the cause and effect.

Goodluck!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 09:28 pm
Also, I think it's "Ghandi", not "Gandi".
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Caldus
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 09:48 pm
My professor circled the 'h' in 'Ghandi' in one of my rough drafts. Guess he's wrong? I looked up some sites and I see different spellings...I see 'Gandi' and 'Gandhi'. Which one is correct?

Thanks.
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Asherman
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 10:27 pm
Caldus,

You have two problems to address: writing clear, interesting prose that keeps a reader with you from start to finish, and secondly providing analysis to support your thesis. If the reader gets tired, confused, or bored they just wont hear you out. Even if you have discovered the cure for the common cold it will be useless unless you can effectively communicate your discovery. Writing can never be as "pure" an expression as mathematics, but you do have to strive for the "purist" expression of your thoughts as possible. That means mastery of grammar, and discipline in how you structure your written, and oral, communications.

A clear thesis supported by well-structured subordinate points/elements is essential to academic writing. Who, what, where, when and why are the foundations of journalistic writing, and they can also be used to write the informative piece ... except the "why" should come first in the sort of writing you are going to be doing for the next few years. "This is so", you will say "because A, B, and C are so". You might use a negative, "This is so, because A is not so". These "proofs" must be free of logical fallicies. In the Thesis you are making an assertion, in the body of your essay you then give the reasons to support your assertion and in fairness and intellectual honesty you should at least outline the arguments that tend to disprove your thesis. In mathematics the integrity of the work is clear because each element must clearly fit into the whole. Writing is much more demanding of us.

Is nonviolence really always the best strategy? Would a non-violent opposition have any chance of success in Hitler's Germany, or in Stalin's Soviet Union? Isn't it possible that the successes of non-violence are confined to its use against only those authorities who have already accepted the idea that opposition can be legitimate, and should be handled justly? What did the conditions surrounding the foundations of the United States have to do with your thesis that centers on the use of non-violence? Where and when did non-violent strategies and tactics begin? Are you going to suggest a revisionist history that says non-violence could have/should have been used at the beginning of the 19th century to eliminate slavery? Non-violence as a real alternative to the Late Unpleasantness? I don't think so, but if that is part of your analysis you will have to prove it much better.

I think that you need to probably throw out almost everything before the 20th century, except as background to demonstrate perhaps how power was used prior to the mahatma. What brought about the end of the Jim Crow Laws? Was it the Civil Rights Movement, or was it the discovery of Hitler's death camps at the end of WWII? How would non-violent strategy work today in the Middle East, and if it is a viable strategy why isn't it used instead of feuding acts of violence? If you are to convince anyone that your thesis, as I understand it, is correct then you certainly haven't established it nor have you shown any analysis to support the notion.

Given the choice of losing your personal or national liberty, or using extreme violence, which would you choose? If punched in the nose, is it better to run away or to fight even though you may lose? The thing is, Caldus, there is no single answer that is right in every occasion. The world is not black and white, but grey. Sometimes and against some enemies it is better to step back a pace and to stand on the high moral ground. In other cases, that strategy will lead to defeat and annihilation. Though we generally recognize that the use of force is riddled with bad consequences, it is sometimes not only the best, but only course of action for men of honor.

I look forward to your rewritten essay. Stick with it and let's get that "A+" that your hard work should earn.
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Caldus
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 10:29 pm
Got some questions (trying to edit some more of this):

1. Would it be feasible to say that Whites in general were 'illusioned' by the belief that Blacks were bad people and that King 'disillusioned' them? How can I reword this? I am very horrible at putting my thoughts down on paper clearly.

2. Would it be feasible to say that Talos' methods of exposing the evils of the South was worse than King's? I'm too sure how I should explain this either...

Thanks.
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Caldus
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 10:36 pm
Asherman, thank you for your comments. I'm sure it's obvious to you that I do not know much about history. My US History teacher back in high school would always make us read out of the textbook. I did not learn much needless to say.

As far as the thesis goes: could I revise it to say that it was the best method for social change (changing the racially unbalanced America) during the 1950's and 1960's in America?

I really do appreciate your criticism.
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Asherman
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 10:48 pm
If you must, why not say that whites believe blacks to be inferior and unworthy of full citizenship, but that notion was increasingly challenged by the Civil Rights Movement of the Sixties. While Dr. King was a leading spokesman and moral arbiter of the Movement, he was not alone.

The appeal to the moral conscience of the majority in both India and the United States was the key to political success. In one case, the end of Colonization, and in the other the end of Jim Crow Laws that stratified the social condition for a sizable minority. In India the end of Colonization meant civil war and partition that has continued to this very day. The nuclear stand-off between India and Pakistan has its roots in the failure of non-violence to change hearts as well as political conditions. In America the end of Jim Crow is a very good thing, and has opened the doors of opportunity for millions. Some have used those opportunities to the fullest, and others have not. Bitterness, blame and prejudice still blacken the hearts of Afro-Americans and white Americans alike. Non-violence didn't have the power to change those hearts, but it did change the Laws.

In re. Talo's methods as opposed to King's methods. "Better", "worse", by what standard do we measure these judgements? Two very different approaches can be equally effective, and the costs may be the same. Value judgements are often not much more than an expression of the person uttering them. Which is better 2+2=4, or 7-3=4. Perhaps both are wrong, because we are measuring the wrong thing, or the final tally isn't in yet. Those "good" v. "bad" judgements can be dangerous things.
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Caldus
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 10:58 pm
Thank you again.

I guess what I am trying to ask is whether Talos' "digging dirt" methods could be proven to be worse than King's civil disobedience tactics in order to expose the evils of the South.
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Caldus
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 11:03 pm
I have edited my introduction (and included the thesis at the end). How does this look?:

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Nonviolent direct action can be defined as any nonviolent means of bringing about social change. It can involve marches, mass demonstrations, sit-ins, boycotts, and civil disobedience. During the 1950's and 1960's, Whites denied Blacks fundamental civil rights such as decent housing, adequate education, and the right to vote. In this time period, many of the shows on television presented Blacks being severely beaten with sticks, fire hoses, and dogs. America was racially unbalanced. Many cities in the South, especially Birmingham, Alabama, enforced segregation and unjust laws. Since the Blacks' powers were limited, they lacked the freedom of choice in many situations. Considered one of the greatest political strategists of all time, Martin Luther King Jr. took action against the racists of the South and compelled them using his nonviolent methods to accept equality. He put the South under political, economic, and moral pressure. He used the power of love for God against his enemies. He stressed that they should not surrender their right to protest in order to allow opportunity to be similarly distributed among the races. Nonviolent direct action was the most powerful method for Blacks to gain liberty and equality during the time.
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Asherman
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 11:10 pm
Was non-violence the best means of abolishing the Jim Crow Laws? Perhaps. What were the alternatives? Would the social trends that existed since the beginning of the 20th century have strengthened, or weakened the Jim Crow Laws between 1950 and the end of the 20th century, even it non-violence was not adopted as a strategy? What were those trends? Could non-violent strategy have been even half as effective if it weren't for national television? What motivated Truman to integrate the Armed Forces? Why did Kennedy send US Marshals into the South. What part did youthful idealism on American college campuses play in bringing down segregation? How many Southerners in the Deep segregated South were already sick to death of the stagnation that it caused in their region. How strong was the KKK, really? These are all factors that might enter into your analysis.

In my personal opinion, non-violence was a very effective strategy in gaining national support for the overthrow of Jim Crow Law. The American People believe in doing the right thing. We believe in equality and in justice. We shed our blood and spend our treasures faster for those moral imperatives than almost anything else. Focusing public attention on the worst and most ignorant Southerners, spurred national action. The nation had long insisted that each locality be left to set its own laws and regulate its society as it saw fit. Federal interference in local matters was resisted as being the first step toward a national dictatorship. FDR ran into the same problem in trying to deal with the Great Depression. The People demanded that the Federal Government do SOMETHING to reduce hardships. Almost every one of FDRs initiatives was found unconstitutional, because the Federal Government was assuming powers that had previously been regarded as forbidden. The same strong Federal reaction to segregation met with many of the same arguments ... "if the Federal government can tell us how our schools are run, what will they take over next?" During the late 1950's the public mood across the country was that Jim Crow was WRONG, and somehow had to be gotten rid of. The Civil Rights Movement further mobilized the conscience of the nation and pushed the Federal government into action. That was a "good thing", right? What arguments might YOU make that it was a "bad thing"?

This thinking business is tough.
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Asherman
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 11:13 pm
Was the South evil? Does that mean everyone in the South was evil, or thought evil thoughts? Were the little children evil, and prejudiced? What percentage of Southerners were evil, and how many merely kept quiet? Were there no Southern White voices raised anywhere, at any time against Jim Crow Laws? Be careful of sweeping statements.
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cicerone imposter
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 11:31 pm
Caldus, I think it would be a good idea to break down your thesis into smaller paragraphs to help in the organization of how your message flows. Your present and past tense words should be consistent for the time period you cover in your presentation. Do you know where Martin Luther King, Jr. learned the idea of non-violence? I think the historical perspective is fine, but too long in relation to the theme of your paper. The current information Asherman provides has greater importance - IMHO.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2003 11:34 pm
Yes, I agree, Asherman. 'Some' or 'many' are qualifying words that can take a bit of impact out of a statement, but situations don't always come down to being 100% one way or the other and it is smart not only to acknowledge that but to pay attention to it in daily life. Sometimes it is the people with the moderate points of view that shift the course of history by moving in one direction or another, and these people may not be the ones speaking the most often or the loudest in a society.
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