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Is the title okay?

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oristarA
 
Reply Wed 10 Nov, 2010 08:47 am
Chapter One

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McTag
 
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Reply Thu 11 Nov, 2010 03:54 pm
@oristarA,

For a title, it seems pretty rambling to me.
oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 11 Nov, 2010 10:49 pm
@McTag,
Thanks.

Make it neat then, please?
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cicerone imposter
 
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Reply Thu 11 Nov, 2010 10:58 pm

Ramblin rose...
oristarA
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 05:16 am
@cicerone imposter,
I read and see that it is crystal clear. So why not tell me it is rambling in your eye. Very Happy
McTag
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 09:14 am
@oristarA,

A title has to short, crisp, punchy.

A subtitle can be more rambling and discursive, but these went out of fashion here about 100 years ago.
oristarA
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 10:44 pm
@McTag,
Got it.
Thank you.
The title is old-fashioned.
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