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The sentence okay? Or edit it please

 
 
Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2010 10:49 pm
Children were wearing grotesque clothes mimicking Indian people in the past.
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contrex
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 12:20 am
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:

Children were wearing grotesque clothes mimicking Indian people in the past.


from the past
laughoutlood
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 12:41 am
@oristarA,
The children wore a grotesque mimickry of ancient Indian apparel.
oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 04:08 am
@contrex,
Thanks.

But , an object can be that that survived from the past. Can people survive from the (ancient) past?
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oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 04:09 am
@laughoutlood,
Thank you.

But I couldn't find the word mimickry in my dictionaries.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 04:25 am
Mimicry (Laughhingoutloud has misspelled it) means bearing a superficial resemblance to something else. Contrex's sentence is reasonable, but you have a point that the people themselves do not survive from the past. Therefore, Laughingoutloud's suggestion may be better.
laughoutlood
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 05:51 am
@oristarA,
The children wore traditional costumes at the celebration.
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JTT
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2010 11:12 am
@Setanta,
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Contrex's sentence is reasonable, but you have a point that the people themselves do not survive from the past.


This is the fella that was suggesting other folks' ideas on language were to be regarded as suspect.

'from the past' does not in any way indicate that these people survive from the past unless that is the intent, say, in a sci-fi situation. Then context would fill us in.

Google exact phrase search - "people from the past"
About 25,800,000 results
oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 19 Oct, 2010 07:15 am
@JTT,
Thank you.

Thanks to all.
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