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Is the sentence okay?

 
 
Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2010 01:44 am

Flowers bloom splendid for heroic deeds, including, but not limited to mine.
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OmSigDAVID
 
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Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2010 01:46 am
@oristarA,
Flowers bloom splendidly for heroic deeds, including, but not limited to, mine.

or:

Flowers bloom splendidly for heroic deeds, including (but not limited to) mine.
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aidan
 
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Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2010 01:47 am
@oristarA,
Reads fine to me. I'd put another comma after limited - but that's a matter of personal style.
*Edited to say that David is technically more grammatically correct, splendidly is the adverbial form that describes the verb bloom, but I like the way yours sounds better.

Is this a line of a poem?
oristarA
 
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Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2010 02:08 am
@aidan,
Just a sentence in a conversation. Wink

Thank you both.
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