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Fri 8 Oct, 2010 09:01 am
Ninety percent of the under-45-year-old health care professionals working in first class hospitals in America nationwide are familiar with able2know.
Yes, it is grammatically correct. The proposition is dubious, but the sentence is just fine.
How about:
Ninety percent of health care professionals under 45 who work in first class hospitals in America are familiar with able2know
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:Ninety percent of the under-45-year-old health care professionals working in first class hospitals in America nationwide are familiar with able2know.
The sentence is fine grammatically. However, you may delete 'the' (the 4th word) without fear. Also 'nationwide' is superfluous, and if you mean "The United States" you should say so.
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