Reply
Sat 6 Dec, 2003 08:47 pm
Jack got hurt on his finger, and the doctor's treatment cured him. What I want to express is:
Each time of the doctor's treatment is just 2 or 3 minutes, and the doctor cured Jack's finger just with two-time treatment.
Can I express this as below?
The doctor cured Jack's finger under two treatments, just in several minutes all together.
I feel this expression sucks. But how can I express it properly?
TIA
The doctor cured Jack's finger in only two treatments of two or three minutes each?
Thanks dlowan. And hope someone else would like to write it with another style.
Hiya Oristar, There's not that much here to work with, stylewise. How's this:
The doctor cured Jack's finger by applying just two short treatments of two to three minutes each.
Stumble It!
Tweet This
Bookmark on Delicious
Share on Facebook
Share on MySpace