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Reply Wed 4 Aug, 2010 07:00 pm
"I have been firmly under the happiness all the time"?

I rewrote it as:

All the time, I've been immersed in happiness...

Further improvement will be appreciated.

Context:

see u,guys~~~
tomorrow is another day~~~
i have been firmly under the happiness all the time
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Reply Wed 4 Aug, 2010 07:16 pm
@oristarA,
The simplest is the best: I have been (very) happy all the time. But if you want to be picturesque try 'I have been immersed in the glow of happiness all the time'.
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laughoutlood
 
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Reply Wed 4 Aug, 2010 07:54 pm
@oristarA,
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see u,guys~~~
tomorrow is another day~~~
i have been firmly under the happiness all the time


deepening bliss
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mister kitten
 
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Reply Wed 4 Aug, 2010 08:47 pm
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:

"I have been firmly under the happiness all the time"?

I rewrote it as:

All the time, I've been immersed in happiness...

Further improvement will be appreciated.

Context:

see u,guys~~~
tomorrow is another day~~~
i have been firmly under the happiness all the time


I don't understand the context, but I'd go with:
Every moment has been pure (bliss/happiness) for me
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laughoutlood
 
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Reply Mon 9 Aug, 2010 03:56 am
@oristarA,
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"I have been firmly under the happiness all the time"?


I'd suggest you paraphrase with, "Keep your chin up".
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