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Is the paragraph clear enough?

 
 
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Reply Fri 30 Jul, 2010 08:29 am
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Later the Bush Administration described the U. S.-Russia relationship as one of “selective confrontation” coupled with “selective cooperation,” thus, the relations between the two countries alternate between intensity and relaxation, contesting above board or under. There are many such stories that people are already very familiar with.


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Reply Fri 30 Jul, 2010 12:26 pm
@fansy,
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alternate between intensity and relaxation, contesting above board or under.

Seems cumbersome to me. Try rewording it at that point.
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