Re: Does it sound like spoken by a native English speaker?
oristarA wrote: The basic research is very important. The progressive history of mankind's modern civilization has fully proved that every major breakthrough in the basic research often causes tremendous and inestimable motivation on raising people's ability to understand and change the world,making innovation in science and technology,forming high technology industry and boosting the progress in economy and culture.
The second sentence could have been spoken by a native English speaker who was a little flustered about being in front of an audience. Besides the obvious problem of the sentence being too long and complex, there are a few oddities:
fully proved -- why not just proved?
the basic research -- don't need "the" here
often -- not needed, it weakens the claim
causes... motivation -- simplify this as a native speaker would
people's -- likely a speaker would include himself and use "our"
forming -- creating or developing are the more common word choices
the progress -- again, unlikely to need "the"
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If you were to rewrite this as a native speaker, it might look like this (
orange words to be pulled,
italics for new words):
The progressive history of
mankind's modern civilization has
fully proved that every major breakthrough in
the basic research
often causes tremendous and inestimable motivation on raising people's raises our ability to understand and change the world,
making increases innovation in science and technology,
forming by developing high technology industry
and boosting the progress in which boosts our economy and culture.
Here's the final, still-complex but more understandable version. Only the italicized words were added.
The basic research is very important. The progressive history of modern civilization has proved that every major breakthrough in basic research
raises our ability to understand and change the world,
increases innovation in science and technology
by developing high technology industry
which boosts our economy and culture.