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Mon 10 May, 2010 03:52 am
Is the sentence "we can achieve great things!" proper English?
Our Philosophy of Care
We individualize a treatment plan for you and your child to achieve the best results, by prioritizing different individual needs and focusing on unique oral and facial characteristics.
Context:
Thank you for your confidence in us; we will do our very best to serve you. Together with you, our office and your family dentist, we can achieve great things!
Our Philosophy of Care
We individualize a treatment plan for you and your child to achieve the best results, by prioritizing different individual needs and focusing on unique oral and facial characteristics.
Yes, the sentence is proper English.
However it is a very broad statement and does not speak to the needs of the patient.
How about:
Thank you for your confidence in us; we will do our very best to serve you. Our qualified staff and dentists can provide the best in professional dental care for you and your family. '
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