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A Chinese maxim

 
 
fansy
 
Reply Thu 15 Apr, 2010 10:42 pm
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If what I do serves the interests of my country, I will go at it even at the cost of my own life, I will not shy away from doing it be it weal or woe.


What do you think of the translation of another Chinese quotation?
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Setanta
 
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Reply Thu 15 Apr, 2010 10:55 pm
@fansy,
It's good, but let's add a little something to make it more clear:

"f what I do serves the interests of my country, I will go at it even at the cost of my own life, I will not shy away from doing it be it weal or woe for me."

You wouldn't want to suggest that you'd "go at" something which might be weal or woe for your country.
fansy
 
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Reply Fri 16 Apr, 2010 01:50 am
@Setanta,
Thanks, Setanta. You understand the context, so your improvement is quite correct.
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westwind
 
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Reply Mon 5 Jul, 2010 08:09 pm
@fansy,
it is not A Chinese maxim. it is bullshit.
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JTT
 
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Reply Mon 5 Jul, 2010 09:10 pm
@Setanta,
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You wouldn't want to suggest that you'd "go at" something which might be weal or woe for your country.


I think that the addition of "for me" makes it clunky. There are enough I's in there and the "even at the cost of my own life" makes it clear.
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