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Reply Mon 12 Apr, 2010 06:49 pm

Is the title below written clearly?

Australia pumps oil from Chinese steamer to control contamination, and a criminal investigation may be carried out
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Reply Mon 12 Apr, 2010 06:55 pm
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:


Is the title below written clearly?

Australia pumps oil from Chinese steamer to control contamination, and a criminal investigation may be carried out


Yes, it is clearly written. If the intent is to create a headline, or a header for an article, though, it would be useful to shorten it:

Australia pumps oil from Chinese ship to control spill; criminal investigation a possibility.

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Reply Mon 12 Apr, 2010 08:08 pm
@Setanta,
Thank you Set.
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