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Sat 27 Mar, 2010 01:57 am
The man has the Patrician look and the grace and dignified posture coupled with an imposing appearance; he defies belittlement.
@oristarA,
be careful what you wish
too wordy for my money
A true patrician, graceful: defying age
@oristarA,
Oristar, the only problems i see are the second and third definite articles, you want to use an indefinite article there (you got it right with "an imposing appearance"):
The man has a Patrician look and a grace and dignified posture coupled with an imposing appearance; he defies belittlement.
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