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Mon 15 Mar, 2010 07:06 am
I am bored by too many words of "different" in the sentence below. How to improve it?
Groups from different race and different area demand different postoperative knee joint function, and they also have different attitude and pursuit about it because of their different lifestyle.
I edit the sentence as below. Do you think it is acceptable?
Groups from different race and area vary in demand for postoperative knee joint function, and in their attitude and pursuit toward the function because of diverse lifestyle.
@oristarA,
How about:
Postoperative knee joint function demands and attitudes vary greatly from patient to patient as a result of differences in race, geographical location, and lifestyles.
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