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raising a family remains a key objective

 
 
tintin
 
Reply Sat 13 Feb, 2010 09:29 am
Please look at this ..

Research shows that marrying and raising a family remains a key objective of most young Americans, as that for other cultures

Research shows that marrying and raising a family remains a key objective of most young Americans, as it is of other cultures

which one is correct way of saying ? Can you please explain bit.

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fresco
 
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Reply Sat 13 Feb, 2010 11:13 am
@tintin,
The second version is correct.
The first version requires "which is the same result" before "as that" in order for it to make sense. In the second version the "it" refers to "the objective" and so it already makes sense.
engineer
 
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Reply Sat 13 Feb, 2010 12:14 pm
@fresco,
I would say for those in other cultures instead of of other cultures.
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tintin
 
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Reply Sun 14 Feb, 2010 03:28 am
as it is of other cultures ...I get lost with this. Is not it should be "for" instead of "of" ? what the native speakers say ?
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Setanta
 
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Reply Sun 14 Feb, 2010 04:20 am
No, that is correct, and logical in English. Let's examine the sentence again:

Research shows that marrying and raising a family remains a key objective of most young Americans, as it is of other cultures.

And now let us write it out in more detail so that you can see the logic being applied here:

Research shows that marrying and raising a family remains a key objective of most young Americans, as it is a key objective of other cultures.

The first example simply eliminates the need to write out "a key objective" twice.
tintin
 
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Reply Sun 14 Feb, 2010 05:03 am
@Setanta,
Yea. Looks better now. Thanks for your time.
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