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Mon 26 Oct, 2009 06:19 pm
Quote:Having run a company of actors with her husband, as well as an antique shop, and with her own family grown-up, Dorothy Edwards was now committed to writing for children.
adjective phrase that helps describe her.
Here's another example:
With her hat on her head, she entered the church.
With his wife by his side, he gave the speech.
@fansy,
I think the parallel parts are supposed to be of same patterns which,of course, is not the case here.
It's okay actually, but the tenses could be smartened up a bit.
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