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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 01:24 am

Chinese Academy of Social Sciences (CASS) has released on October 10 the Report of Third Quarter of 2009: Analysis and Forecast on China's Economic Situation. The report predictes that the growth rate of China's GDP this year will reach 8.3% or so with less likely inflation in the year and the next, thus the set goal of economic growth at "8" will be well met.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 01:57 am
@oristarA,
The Chinese Academy of Social Sciences (CASS) has released on October 10 a report for the Third Quarter of 2009: Analysis and Forecast on China's Economic Situation. The report predicts that the growth rate of China's GDP this year will reach 8.3% or so, with inflation less likely this year and next, thus the goal set of economic growth at "8" will be well met.

The end phrase, "will be well met" is somewhat awkward, but not incorrect. It might read a little better to write ". . . the goal set of economic growth at "8" will easily be met."
oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 03:10 am
@Setanta,
Thank you Set.

But the title of that report in Chinese language has the word "Report" there.
Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 03:38 am
You could capitalize it in English, too. If that is a formal part of the title, then by all means, capitalize it.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 03:56 am
@oristarA,
To capitalize the word report alone?
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 04:03 am
Now why do you ask a question like that? There is nothing in my response to suggest that i'm saying capitalize the word report alone.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 04:04 am
If "the Report for the Third Quarter of 2009" is a formal title of a document routinely issued, then capitalize as you see it here.
oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 05:38 am
@Setanta,
Thanks.
I've capitalized them like what you suggested in the starting post already.
You improved it grammatically.
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 07:29 am
@Setanta,
On October 10th, the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences released their Report for The Third Quarter of 2009: Analysis on China's Economic Situation. The report predicts that this year's growth rate of China's GDP will reach approximately 8.3%, thus meeting the economic growth rate goal of 8.

Is the acronym of CASS used later in the report? If not, do not use the acronym here.

Is the goal of 8% for next year or this year? When was the 8% goal set? The answers to these questions could change how I would phrase the second sentence.



(the thread title is not well-written. Clearly, not clear. )
oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 08:43 am
@ehBeth,
Thanks.
It is on the title:

CASS: GOP Growth Rate to Reach 8.3% with Less Inflation This Year

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Chinese Academy of Social Sciences (CASS) has released on October 10 the Report of Third Quarter of 2009: Analysis and Forecast on China's Economic Situation. The report predictes that the growth rate of China's GDP this year will reach 8.3% or so with less likely inflation in the year and the next, thus the set goal of economic growth at "8" will be well met.

The report pointed out: Pushed by economic stimulus policies, the investment on fixed assets has turned out to be vital momentum for expanding domestic demand and ensuring growth. It is predicted that the total investment this year on social fixed assets will be about 22.7 trillion RMB. Excluding the price factor, the actual investment growth rate is 34.4%, 2.26 times that of the last year.

According to the forecast, the customer price, retail price of consumer goods and the price of investment goods will drop 0.5%, 0.8% and 1.8% respectively. Gross retail sales of customer goods will be up to 1250 billion RMB. The actual growth rate is 16.3%.
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