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Tue 6 Oct, 2009 08:23 am
Context:
Tibetan Girl Dancing with Hu Jintao in Tiananmen Square: I Am a Bit Nervous
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During the 3-minute intimate touch with President Hu, the girl only said two sentences: One is that Hu asked her unit and she answered; another is that when first round waltz stopped and Hu wanted to quit,, she told him "the next round will get started immediately". So Hu smiled back, picked up the pace and danced again with her.
No,I don't think it's used correctly. Actually the paragraph does have other grammatical errors but since you only asked for "touch" you shall receive the answer for this one.
I would say that they shared an "intimate moment"
Thanks.
Would someone tell me whether can I rewrite "only said two sentences" as "only said two words"?