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On the last weekend, as usual, I took a casual walk to a nearby luxury goods shopping mall. Not that I was so rich to buy something from there, it was just a way to sharpen my sense of marketing. To be straight, a place like that might help me peep into the dynamic state of international business, which is one of my hobbies.

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Last weekend, as usual, I strolled to a nearby high-end shopping mall. Not that I could afford to buy anything; it was more in the nature of marketing research. A place like that gives me a peep into the dynamic state of international business, which is one of my hobbies.

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