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Is the grammar correct?

 
 
fansy
 
Reply Tue 8 Sep, 2009 06:24 pm
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The financial sector has been among the most volatile " stocks there fell by as much as 1.7 percent during the day, only to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing little changed.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 8 Sep, 2009 07:19 pm
Not bad, but you should do something about "little changed." You could write: " . . . to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing--little changed." Or, you could write: ". . . to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing; little changed."

But i think it would work best, and be very characteristic of English expression to make it a separate sentence: " . . . to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing. Little changed."
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Lightwizard
 
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Reply Tue 8 Sep, 2009 08:31 pm
@fansy,
My Whitesmoke application could find no error in the grammar, but as S pointed out, the sentence is awkward (something a grammar check will almost always miss).
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JTT
 
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Reply Wed 9 Sep, 2009 01:59 pm
@fansy,
Can you provide a link to the example, Fansy?
fansy
 
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Reply Thu 10 Sep, 2009 06:35 am
@JTT,
This is where you can read the article, the quotation can be found in the 12th paragraph [towards the end of the page ]
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/08/11/business/worldbusiness/11markets.html
Thanks
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