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Tue 8 Sep, 2009 06:24 pm
Quote:The financial sector has been among the most volatile " stocks there fell by as much as 1.7 percent during the day, only to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing little changed.
Not bad, but you should do something about "little changed." You could write: " . . . to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing--little changed." Or, you could write: ". . . to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing; little changed."
But i think it would work best, and be very characteristic of English expression to make it a separate sentence: " . . . to climb as much as 1.1 percent before closing. Little changed."
@fansy,
My Whitesmoke application could find no error in the grammar, but as S pointed out, the sentence is awkward (something a grammar check will almost always miss).
@fansy,
Can you provide a link to the example, Fansy?
@JTT,
This is where you can read the article, the quotation can be found in the 12th paragraph [towards the end of the page ]
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/08/11/business/worldbusiness/11markets.html
Thanks