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oristarA
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Wed 22 Jul, 2009 11:29 pm
I wrote three titles and feel that they need your commenting or editing to make them terser:
Expert: Sarkorzy's reform intent to show off himself without care of people
British oil worker strike tensioned to possibly endanger oil supply nationwide
Egypt president says Gaza perhaps to "recover calm" next week
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oolongteasup
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Thu 23 Jul, 2009 01:00 am
@oristarA,
SARKOSY'S COSY REFORMS
POMS STOP WORK OILY
MUBAREK SEES CALMER GAZA CRYSTALISING
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oristarA
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Thu 23 Jul, 2009 07:23 am
@oolongteasup,
POMS STOP WORK OILY? It sounds very confusing.
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panzade
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Thu 23 Jul, 2009 07:50 am
@oristarA,
oolong is composing BIG newspaper headlines
how about:
British oil workers strike amidst possible oil supply shortages?
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Wy
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Tue 11 Aug, 2009 05:09 pm
@oristarA,
Sarkorzy's "Reform"?
Nation's Oil Threatened by Strikers
Possible Calm in Gaza
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Setanta
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Wed 12 Aug, 2009 04:04 am
@oristarA,
Expert: Sarkozy's (note the spelling of the name) phony reforms are all self-promotion at the expense of the people.
British oil worker strike may endanger national oil supply.
Egyptian President says Gaza may recover its calm next week.
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JTT
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Wed 12 Aug, 2009 09:54 am
@oristarA,
Quote:
Title editing, commenting wanted
Title editing, comments wanted
Using 'comment
ing
' doesn't sound natural to me, Oristar.
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oolongteasup
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Sun 16 Aug, 2009 08:25 pm
@JTT,
Quote:
Title editing, comments wanted
what about: title editing comments wanting
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