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oristarA
 
Reply Wed 22 Jul, 2009 11:29 pm
I wrote three titles and feel that they need your commenting or editing to make them terser:

Expert: Sarkorzy's reform intent to show off himself without care of people


British oil worker strike tensioned to possibly endanger oil supply nationwide

Egypt president says Gaza perhaps to "recover calm" next week
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oolongteasup
 
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Reply Thu 23 Jul, 2009 01:00 am
@oristarA,
SARKOSY'S COSY REFORMS

POMS STOP WORK OILY

MUBAREK SEES CALMER GAZA CRYSTALISING
oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 23 Jul, 2009 07:23 am
@oolongteasup,
POMS STOP WORK OILY? It sounds very confusing.
panzade
 
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Reply Thu 23 Jul, 2009 07:50 am
@oristarA,
oolong is composing BIG newspaper headlines


how about:

British oil workers strike amidst possible oil supply shortages?



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Wy
 
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Reply Tue 11 Aug, 2009 05:09 pm
@oristarA,
Sarkorzy's "Reform"?

Nation's Oil Threatened by Strikers

Possible Calm in Gaza
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Setanta
 
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Reply Wed 12 Aug, 2009 04:04 am
@oristarA,
Expert: Sarkozy's (note the spelling of the name) phony reforms are all self-promotion at the expense of the people.

British oil worker strike may endanger national oil supply.

Egyptian President says Gaza may recover its calm next week.
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JTT
 
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Reply Wed 12 Aug, 2009 09:54 am
@oristarA,
Quote:
Title editing, commenting wanted


Title editing, comments wanted

Using 'commenting' doesn't sound natural to me, Oristar.
oolongteasup
 
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Reply Sun 16 Aug, 2009 08:25 pm
@JTT,
Quote:
Title editing, comments wanted


what about: title editing comments wanting
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