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Sat 16 Feb, 2008 11:33 am
Shermaine does not like to go swimming with her friends. She likes to go swimming alone.
Which is the correct sentence when the above sentences are joined?
1. Shermaine prefers going swimming alone to going swimming with her friends.
2. Shermaine prefers going swimming alone to swimming alone.
Many thanks.
1. Sentence 2 does not make any sense.
2. The phrase "going swimming" slightly idiomatic and rather clumsy in this context. I would just use the word "swimming".
3. If I were asked to produce one single sentence which conveyed the meaning of the two sentences you wrote, I would write something like this:
Shermaine would rather swim alone than [do so] with her friends.
Words in square brackets optional.
Many thanks, Contrex.
I;ve removed 'going'.
Shermaine does not like swimming with her friends. She likes swimming alone.
I believe the above sentences when joined should be as follows.
Shermaine prefers swimming alone to swimming with her friends.
Am I correct?
I believe your version is better, but is the amended version of mine correct?
Many thanks.
Yoong Liat wrote:Shermaine prefers swimming alone to swimming with her friends.
Am I correct?
I believe your version is better, but is the amended version of mine correct?
It is "correct" in the sense that it does not break any grammatical rules, and it conveys the meaning intended, but it commits the aesthetic sin of repeating the word "swimming" unecessarily.
Many thanks, Contrex.
I agree with what you said.