Wow...it sounds to me that she has the makings of a great writer if she self-narrates in that much detail. She uses transitions and everything!
I wish more of my students would do that. It would sure make my job of teaching them writing a lot easier!
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Good for your daughter! It sounds like you have a very bright, cute little girl. Enjoy it!