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rephrasing of sentence

 
 
Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:27 am
We were greeted by fine weather upon our early morning arrival on 19 November 2007.

Could someone please improve on the sentence for me?

Many thanks.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:29 am
It is beyond improvement. That is the finest sentence I have ever seen.

(And, yes, I have been drinking)
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:32 am
The drunk is correct (mostly). The sentence is fine as it is, and needs no improvement.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:34 am
Few commas wouldn't hurt.
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Yoong Liat
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:38 am
Thanks, Setanta and Gus.

Hi Gus

In future, don't reply when you're under the influence of alcohol.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:39 am
Stop me if you can.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:40 am
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Yoong Liat
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:44 am
gustavratzenhofer wrote:
Stop me if you can.
I can't. But don't drive when you drink. I don't drink and that's why I don't know how to joke.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:48 am
Yoong Liat wrote:
gustavratzenhofer wrote:
Stop me if you can.
I can't. But don't drive when you drink. I don't drink and that's why I don't know how to joke.


Thanks for the new sig line. That was absolutely, friggin' brilliant!
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Yoong Liat
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 11:51 am
Great minds think alike, Gus.
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SULLYFISH66
 
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Reply Mon 17 Dec, 2007 05:41 pm
We were greeted by fine weather upon our early morning arrival on 19 November 2007.


Upon arriving on November 19, 2007, in early morning, we were greeted by fine weather.
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