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Mon 8 Oct, 2007 08:29 am
Can you tell me if this is an example of a good paragraph:
Patio furniture for this year comes in a variety of colors, even hot pink and bright yellow. This year's trend will move away from softer colors like light green and traditional colors like black or brown. Instead, outdoor furniture will be bright and party-ready. Many companies are even offering color-coordinates accessories like tablecloths, plastic dinnerware, cups, cushions and other items.
also could you tell me what my thesis sentence would be?
I suppose I will have to let pass the (to me) misspelling of "colour", but I think you meant to type "color-coordinated accessories".
The thesis statement is that sentence or two in your text that contains the focus of your essay and tells your reader what the essay is going to be about. At a guess, I'd say your sentence is going to be something like "Patio furniture is colorful this year."
PS There is no letter "e" in the word "grammar".
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