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Reply Fri 7 Sep, 2007 12:59 pm
It was a school for students whom teachers had given up (hope) on.

Is 'hope' required?

Many thanks.
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happycat
 
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Reply Fri 7 Sep, 2007 02:06 pm
It was a school for students for whom teachers had given up hope.


maybe. I just said that sentence so many times it doesn't make sense to me anymore! Laughing
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Fri 7 Sep, 2007 05:41 pm
"Had no hope for" or "Had given up hope for" or "had given up hope".
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Yoong Liat
 
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Reply Sat 8 Sep, 2007 10:36 am
happycat wrote:
It was a school for students for whom teachers had given up hope.


maybe. I just said that sentence so many times it doesn't make sense to me anymore! Laughing


I think it should be: It was a school whose teachers had given up hope for their students. (Is this sentence correct?)
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Sat 8 Sep, 2007 11:23 am
Yoong--

Point of style here.

Which is more important for your thought, the school or the teachers?

"It was a school" wastes words--and "it" has no referent.

"In that school teachers had abandoned hope for their students."
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Yoong Liat
 
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Reply Sat 8 Sep, 2007 11:30 am
Thanks, Noddy.
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