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Fri 7 Sep, 2007 12:59 pm
It was a school for students whom teachers had given up (hope) on.
Is 'hope' required?
Many thanks.
"Had no hope for" or "Had given up hope for" or "had given up hope".
happycat wrote:It was a school for students for whom teachers had given up hope.
maybe. I just said that sentence so many times it doesn't make sense to me anymore!
I think it should be: It was a school whose teachers had given up hope for their students. (Is this sentence correct?)
Yoong--
Point of style here.
Which is more important for your thought, the school or the teachers?
"It was a school" wastes words--and "it" has no referent.
"In that school teachers had abandoned hope for their students."