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How to describe these?

 
 
Enyo
 
Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 09:13 am
I want to improve my writing skills and make my essays interesting, could anyone help me in describing the following nouns (they're nouns, am I right? Razz ).

- A person's height (besides tall and short?)
- Old and aged walls/buildings
- A modern building

I'm sorry if my English's bad, it's not my native language. Thank you.
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Mame
 
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Reply Mon 20 Aug, 2007 09:49 am
How do you want to describe them? As in:

The building facade was old and crumbling? Or

The building's exterior was as crumbly as blue cheese?
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Quincy
 
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Reply Mon 20 Aug, 2007 12:02 pm
With regards to height; is the person actually short or tall?
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Mon 20 Aug, 2007 02:04 pm
Metaphors are helpful: Big as a linebacker, scrawny as a famine victim, pint-sized....
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hannon
 
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Reply Fri 21 Sep, 2007 03:44 pm
you could use terms like "statuesque" or "large framed" for big people, how about "ancient and crumbling" as descriptive terms for old walls, might i suggest you avail yourself of a thesaurus (english ) which gives a selection of literary alternatives for specific words or phrases, good luck with learning the english language, i`ve been at it all my life and am still learning.
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Aimus
 
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Reply Thu 27 Sep, 2007 07:02 pm
How to describe these?
A person's height: How about dominating for the main character and everyone else he was towering above? You could use the other characters to describe the main character as tall in an informal way (no use of tall or short).
Old and Aged: Sagging, creaking, weathered, dilapidated, moldy, stagnant, "seen better days", "weaving when the wind blows", you could also do smells of an old building.
Modern building: Architecture, smooth lines, smells of a new building, contemporary, clean, colors to define contemporary, etc.

Good luck with your writing!
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Enyo
 
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Reply Fri 28 Sep, 2007 12:45 am
Thank you for all your inputs! I shall make good use of words suggested.

As crumbly as blue cheese? I wonder what it means?

Quincy wrote:
With regards to height; is the person actually short or tall?

I want adjectives for both. Razz

Noddy24 wrote:
Metaphors are helpful: Big as a linebacker, scrawny as a famine victim, pint-sized....


Yes, I do love metaphors, it helps to express better. Another question, can I use idioms in formal writings? Are all idioms formal?
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Fri 28 Sep, 2007 11:08 am
Some idioms verge on slang, others are completely appropriate in formal writing.

I'm afraid you have to examine each idiom in the context you plan to use.
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