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Thu 16 Aug, 2007 07:12 am
1. They are flying kites on /during a hot / windy day.
I think it should be They are flying kites on a hot windy day.
(b) On the road back home, he saw the boys running on a track on a hot day.
It should be One hot day, on the way back home, he saw the boys running on a track.
Am I correct in both cases?
yes, Yoong Liat, your sentences are good ones.
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