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Fri 27 Jul, 2007 04:35 pm
Although some of this may be true, it is also true that for some children television, films and radio are the only contact with other cultures.
Should their be a comma, semi-colon or colon between children and television?
No punctuation is needed between children and television.
A colon or semicolon would be wrong. A comma wouldn't be entirely wrong, but you'd have to add two commas:
Although some of this may be true, it is also true that, for some children, television, films and radio are the only contact with other cultures.
I think the sentence is fine the way it is.
I should have included no punctuation as an option. I thought it needed something because when reading it I pause.
Thanks for the quick reply
guelon
Re: needs a comma?
guelon30000 wrote:Although some of this may be true, it is also true that for some children television, films and radio are the only contact with other cultures.
Should their be a comma, semi-colon or colon between children and television?
There shouldn't be a comma between "children" and "television" unless you also put a comma between "that" and "for" ("for some children" acts as a parenthetical phrase). And there should be a comma between "films" and "and" (the dreaded
serial comma).
You should be warned, however, that more blood than ink has been spilled over comma disputes, and you must be prepared to fight to the death to defend your ultimate choice.