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Sun 22 Jul, 2007 09:18 pm
The ceiling of the ancient temple rose up majestically to an awesome sight.
Rising ____________________________________________________ .
How would the sentence be phrased using "Rising" as the first word?
Many thanks.
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The ceiling of the ancient temple rose up majestically to an awesome sight.
Rising majestically, the ceiling of the ancient temple was an awesome sight.
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Joe Nation wrote:The ceiling of the ancient temple rose up majestically to an awesome sight.
Rising majestically, the ceiling of the ancient temple was an awesome sight.
" ... the ceiling of the ancient temple was an awesome sight".
Can the ceiling look
awesome just because it is at a great height? Is 'awesome' the appropriate word?
Many thanks.
Awesome is sometimes overused these days, teenagers in American describe everything as awesome, but, in this sentence, it is appropriate.
Outstanding, stunning, remarkable would all work as well.
Joe(more tonight)Nation
Thanks, Joe.
I like the way you answer: very amusing and clear.