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Regular word sentence then question at the end, how do you do it?

 
 
Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 12:44 pm
I'm just wondering, if I want to make a sentence stating something, then a question that somehow relates to the statement at the end, how would I do that?

Example of what I want to do:
Of course, You can dine and talk with us today—but where will you sleep?
or
Of course, You can dine and talk with us today; but where will you sleep?
or
Of course, You can dine and talk with us today. But where will you sleep?
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 02:52 pm
@CodeMills,
They're okay Code but in the first two don't cap "You", while the comma can go
neologist
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 03:17 pm
@dalehileman,
The third one also has a comma before you.
I like the second choice
Without the comma, of course
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FBM
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 04:20 pm
@CodeMills,
CodeMills wrote:

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Of course, You can dine and talk with us today—but where will you sleep?


"Of course, you..." The hyphen is OK. It's a matter of preference for the author. It shows a dramatic pause.

Quote:
Of course, You can dine and talk with us today; but where will you sleep?


"Of course, you..." This is not OK. There are only a few ways to use a semicolon (Wink correctly, and this isn't one of them.

Quote:
Of course, You can dine and talk with us today. But where will you sleep?


"Of course, you can..." This is also correct. The full stop (period) also shows a slight pause. It's less dramatic/emphatic than using the hyphen, I think.

Don't forget that we don't capitalize the first word after a transition. Smile
neologist
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 04:34 pm
@FBM,
I was born in New Jersey, so I could be completely ignorant of such things. .

But I have labored for years in the belief that a semicolon could be used between independent clauses; it can, in fact, be used wherever a period could be used. I prefer using in cases where a second sentence is in explanation of (or, somewhat less important than) a first.

FBM
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 04:42 pm
@neologist,
Yeah, you're right; it's just that I've never seen it used to introduce an interrogative. Seems to me that it's usually used to show a dramatic cause-and-effect or surprising contrast relationship. I won't say that it's wrong; I'll just say that it's not standard or borderline acceptable.

But then again, I'm not particularly fond of prescriptive grammar; descriptive grammar suits most of my students' needs better.
neologist
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 04:54 pm
@FBM,
It's best to keep Strunk and White handy.
Then do whatever the heck you please.
FBM
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 05:05 pm
@neologist,
That last bit works only if you're a reasonably well-educated native speaker. Wink
neologist
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 08:20 pm
@FBM,
I suppose how one chooses to write depends on such things as intended audience, voice, point of view, etc.
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roger
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 09:09 pm
@FBM,
FBM wrote:

That last bit works only if you're a reasonably well-educated native speaker. Wink


I agree with you and neologist. Don't make mistakes out of ignorance. Do it for specific effect.
FBM
 
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Reply Sun 22 Feb, 2015 09:36 pm
@roger,
Yeah, that's what I was trying to say. Learn the rules, then learn how to break them skillfully.
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