Tue 1 Jul, 2003 01:05 pm - Forgive me, is that pile your stuff?
of chihuauas you can't get enough!
You've got t-shirts and hats
with those mutts you've gone bats
I see that its them that you love!
I... (view)
Tue 1 Jul, 2003 12:32 am - Ok I'll go to that place! :smile: As someone who enjoys travel by car at high speeds, I enjoyed your poem very much. I found something here I could relate to, and isn't that an essence... (view)
Tue 1 Jul, 2003 12:29 am - Had artistically shaved my initials
by his tattoo of two shiny pistols.
He groned and he turned
He awoke, and returned
an elbow, aimed like a missle.
I awoke to an outrageous morning (view)
Mon 30 Jun, 2003 11:02 pm - There are times I've been so embarrassed
That my skin, which is really the fairest,
turns bright orange and red
and I wish I were dead
but I grin and demure and just bare it.
Last eve... (view)
Mon 30 Jun, 2003 02:53 am - I love just to sit in my bower,
the Peace Lily is my sweet flower.
I pot it and pray
that the flowers will stay
but it wilts, hour after hour.
Screaming is so overrated (view)
Mon 30 Jun, 2003 02:49 am - This is my stab at poetry. It came about when I had a series of thought that I didn't think could be expressed otherwise. Since I am not practiced or studied in poetry, I would appreciate... (view)
Thu 26 Jun, 2003 10:05 pm - Hi Raveneye,
This poem really touched me, because I recognise those feelings you write about, and I miss the sun lately. I like the way you describe the sun as "glamorous", to me that... (view)
Thu 26 Jun, 2003 09:53 pm - I sit with my cold drink and fan
And work on my buttery tan
But each time I get there
I look like old leather
A gold wearing, macho old man.
There are men who wear dresses, its true (view)
Thu 26 Jun, 2003 09:50 pm - Hey Diane!
I have a problem with big gigantic run on sentances and using too many lovely and wonderful descriptives all the time so that is why I really noticed your run on's know what I... (view)
Thu 26 Jun, 2003 09:46 pm - Hey Sofia,
You really nailed the concept of this exercise, in my humble opinion. Usually I try to add something constructive to further the usefulness of "writing exercise" crits,... (view)
