I like the girl sitting on the chair. I like red too.
Only objection: the red chair is very overpowering and takes up almost
2 third of the page. The girl is almost lost in it.
And her shoulders are low and her hands are between her legs with her feet apart... like a little girl sitting in a big chair.
Works for me in making me "feel" her even though she is obviously also very sensual..
And the fact that she's sitting on the edge of the giant chair makes the whole thing a bit edgier. I like it, but I really like the yellow one.
Tonight's sketch....damn, stayed up too late on this.