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Let's write a novel

 
 
Dutchy
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 07:15 am
was about to
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cumulus
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 07:19 am
explode when Eddie
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 07:23 am
saved the day
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 10:36 am
Chapter Six

Safety was here beyond the pale blue sky overhead from which Vleg was looking down her spaceship telescope and remarking to her Captain "Who is that bloke singing to the crowd behind the rubbish dump? He looks like abit of allright".

"That's Eddie" the Captain replied. "I'll wager that he is a great stud as well; look at that physique and listen to the authority in his mighty voice as he addresses the crowd with such compassion!"

Vleg swooned. When she recovered and reapplied her make-up, and adjusted her bra, she still could not believe how gorgeous Eddie was.

The Captain, realising that Vleg was besotted, hatched a cunning plan to emphatically and conclusively end the war as well as all discomposure over who she should give her overdue favours to. He sent a swirling lazar transporter beam down to the planet surface - reminding Vleg of their true situation - caught up a surprised Eddie and deposited him right into their cockpit, and when Eddie saw that gorgeous figure of Vleg's and that smile smile of hers matching her incredible enthusiasm for his smile which was not forthcoming because Eddie was in a total state of shock from his sudden change of environment, well, he was nonplussed for the moment.

He looked at his surroundings and tensed, the atmosphere was charged with expectation and about to explode when Eddie inadvertently saved the day when he recognised the light in Vleg's eye and he burst out laughing, telling Vleg "You're not how I expected you to be!"

Everybody relaxed and
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 03:13 pm
started to have
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cumulus
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 07:24 pm
some eye-contact
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Sat 7 Oct, 2006 10:10 pm
with the other
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cumulus
 
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Reply Sun 8 Oct, 2006 03:18 am
side of the
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Sun 8 Oct, 2006 06:43 am
opposing mob from
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Sun 8 Oct, 2006 06:49 am
the control room
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Sun 8 Oct, 2006 06:52 am
and decided to
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cumulus
 
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Reply Sun 8 Oct, 2006 10:38 pm
rather nervously, begin
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Sun 8 Oct, 2006 10:47 pm
Chapter Six

Safety was here beyond the pale blue sky overhead from which Vleg was looking down her spaceship telescope and remarking to her Captain "Who is that bloke singing to the crowd behind the rubbish dump? He looks like abit of allright".

"That's Eddie" the Captain replied. "I'll wager that he is a great stud as well; look at that physique and listen to the authority in his mighty voice as he addresses the crowd with such compassion!"

Vleg swooned. When she recovered and reapplied her make-up, and adjusted her bra, she still could not believe how gorgeous Eddie was.

The Captain, realising that Vleg was besotted, hatched a cunning plan to emphatically and conclusively end the war as well as all discomposure over who she should give her overdue favours to. He sent a swirling lazar transporter beam down to the planet surface - reminding Vleg of their true situation - caught up a surprised Eddie and deposited him right into their cockpit, and when Eddie saw that gorgeous figure of Vleg's and that smile smile of hers matching her incredible enthusiasm for his smile which was not forthcoming because Eddie was in a total state of shock from his sudden change of environment, well, he was nonplussed for the moment.

He looked at his surroundings and tensed, the atmosphere was charged with expectation and about to explode when Eddie inadvertently saved the day when he recognised the light in Vleg's eye and he burst out laughing, telling Vleg "You're not how I expected you to be!"

Everybody relaxed a little and began to make eye-contact with each other, even the uniformed mob on the other side of the control panel looking in were smiling.

They decided to rather nervously open a dialogue.

"Do you come to conquer this planet often?" asked Eddie...
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Dorothy Parker
 
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Reply Mon 9 Oct, 2006 02:50 am
lighting a cigarette
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Mathos
 
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Reply Mon 9 Oct, 2006 01:09 pm
with his zippo
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Mon 9 Oct, 2006 07:42 pm
and approaching Vleg
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Kehoe
 
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Reply Mon 9 Oct, 2006 09:42 pm
but then decided
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Tue 10 Oct, 2006 02:57 am
saying "Listen, why...
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Tue 10 Oct, 2006 11:04 pm
don't we all
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wandeljw
 
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Reply Wed 11 Oct, 2006 08:48 am
just coexist peacefully!"
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