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Let's write a novel

 
 
wandeljw
 
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Reply Fri 3 Nov, 2006 08:01 am
would be to
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Fri 3 Nov, 2006 12:51 pm
play it safe
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Kehoe
 
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Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2006 02:32 am
because then he
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 11:27 am
Chapter Seven

Meanwhile Eddie was still dazzled from the brightly lit reflection of the shiny coloured spaceship in a puddle of clear rainwater that had collected under the bath and assailed his eyes upon awakening. Then the ship had abruptly veered away and all was still. He tripped over the debris of unlit molotov cocktails left behind by the rebellious mob who had not had time to clear up before they had scattered in fear at their leader's sudden disappearance and the lazar blasts from the descending spaceship.

"Is there anybody left at all?" he called.

A deadly silence greeted his question. Oh, is there something wrong here, he wondered. Where has everybody gone? He was astonished to see no crowd here.

Eddie walked towards where the spaceship had last been seen, wondering what what would happen next. He shrugged in disbelief, wondering whether a terrible showdown could be avoided and why he had been beamed back down to the planet surface just as he had been about to kiss Vleg. What could he hope to accomplish if the planet was under attack and would all the food soon have been eaten.

Contemplating this horrible situation, Eddie resolved that the best thing to do was to keep himself safe becausel then he could do more for
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 01:59 pm
the poor people
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7twissy
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 02:01 pm
whom he had
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 02:33 pm
suffered so much
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Kehoe
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 08:49 pm
because they had
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 08:58 pm
no food and
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Kehoe
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 09:45 pm
no water, so
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 10:00 pm
he could do
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Thu 16 Nov, 2006 02:37 pm
Chapter Seven

Meanwhile Eddie was still dazzled from the brightly lit reflection of the shiny coloured spaceship in a puddle of clear rainwater that had collected under the bath and assailed his eyes upon awakening. Then the ship had abruptly veered away and all was still. He tripped over the debris of unlit molotov cocktails left behind by the rebellious mob who had not had time to clear up before they had scattered in fear at their leader's sudden disappearance and the lazar blasts from the descending spaceship.

"Is there anybody left at all?" he called.

A deadly silence greeted his question. Oh, is there something wrong here, he wondered. Where has everybody gone? He was astonished to see no crowd here.

Eddie walked towards where the spaceship had last been seen, wondering what what would happen next. He shrugged in disbelief, wondering whether a terrible showdown could be avoided and why he had been beamed back down to the planet surface just as he had been about to kiss Vleg. What could he hope to accomplish if the planet was under attack and would all the food soon have been eaten.

Contemplating this horrible situation, Eddie resolved that the best thing to do was to keep himself safe because then he could do more for the poor people whom he had lead and befriended and suffered so much for inside himself because they had no food and no running water so he could do no wrong as far as they were concerned.

Eddie walked towards...
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Thu 16 Nov, 2006 02:39 pm
the spot where
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Casino Joe
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 04:00 pm
he had last
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 06:59 pm
seen the exotic
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garth809
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 08:06 pm
Dancer, fully clothed
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 08:19 pm
but naked underneath
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garth809
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 08:21 pm
eyeing him lustfully
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Dutchy
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 09:25 pm
he thought to
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garth809
 
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Reply Thu 23 Nov, 2006 09:27 pm
Try and find
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