Let's write a novel

Chapter Two

For once the Knights Of Jedda who wore the long white robes of the Priestesses' of Ancient Eygpt were ready to...just then something that made a great grinding noise captured their attention. There, in the corner was a strange object being bathed in light Italian Olive Oil which rendered it invisible!

Nevertheless they had known it was lurking there because of its distinctive odour and its strange habit of shaking the blanket that covered...

PS think Strange object being is a great title for the novel [from an entry by Dutchy]... What does anyone else think?

It's fine by me...


it every five

Thanx Tino! Any further opinions?

seconds. The Knights

How can I object.

Thankyou

were trying to...

control the situation


(The title sounds catchy)

by injecting cold

humourless humour into

the atmosphere directly

above the object

that is about

Chapter Two

For once the Knights Of Jedda who wore the long white robes of the Priestesses' of Ancient Eygpt were ready to...just then something that made a great grinding noise captured their attention. There, in the corner was a strange object being bathed in light Italian Olive Oil which rendered it invisible!

Nevertheless they had known it was lurking there because of its distinctive odour and its strange habit of shaking the blanket that covered it every five seconds or so.

The Knights were trying to control the situation by injecting cold humourless humour directly into the atmosphere above the object that this is all about, namely the dangerous Vleg

that inhuman creature

that once controlled

the whole universe

and is now

an odorous mass

in the minds

of those who

Profess to love