Please help me complete this English Love Poem

I'll give you
My eyes to watch for light.
My nose to sense steam.
My lips to assure you tonight.
My shoulders to lift you in this dream.

I'll give you
My arms to shield you from the skies.
My hands to assure you of your homes.
My legs to chase the butterflies.
My feet to follow your soul as it roams.

I'll give you
My heart, which forever beats your memory.
My prayers, which forever guides your way.
My self, which wants you to be free.
My life, which will go if only you will stay.

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Hiya Armageddon,

thanx. that's nice too.

you guys are really talented.

Arthur

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Thank you

What grade do you teach?

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I need more replies on this poem plsssss.

Armageddon wrote:

Thank you

What grade do you teach?

Hey Armageddon,

As I said in previous post, I'm a teacher trainer. And my trainees are all teachers of the Brat Brigades in primary and secondary schools. And thanx for asking.

Arthur

I need more replies on the poem pls!!

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Please help me complete this English Love Poem
I WORKED VERY HARD ON THIS POEM.

Hope you like what you see, Arthur. By the way, it's good to meet you! Smile

I wrote this as if it were from a man to a woman..

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I'll Give You My All

I'll give you
My eyes to savor your soul
My nose for lies if tales be told
My lips to brush your nest of love
My shoulders for trust in years to come.

I'll give you
My arms to guard you at night
My hands to heal the hurts of life
My legs to run the race to win
My feet for dancing a fancied spin.
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I'll give you
My breath which whispers your name
My burning desire to fire your flames
My wit to make you helplessly laugh
My infinite promise forever to last.

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PoetSeductress wrote:

I WORKED VERY HARD ON THIS POEM.

Hope you like what you see, Arthur. By the way, it's good to meet you!

thanx so very much PoetSeductress. i like it very much. Nice to meet ya 2! Cya around.

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Arthur wrote:

Nice to meet ya 2!

You hit the nail in the head, Arthur!

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Francis wrote:

Arthur wrote:
Nice to meet ya 2!

You hit the nail in the head, Arthur!

hit the nail in the head? ouch! Could anyone explain what that means eh? is it one of the so called slangs?

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Heh! Heh! Francis is French and them frenchmen like to be different. Anyone can say, "Hit the nail ON the head".

PoetSeductress, that is lovely. You ought to do more in the poetry forum.

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Please help me complete this English Love Poem
Thank you so much, Letty.

This is the first time I've ever shared the poetic side of myself, publicly. It's wonderful to notice how so many very talented people there are, here.

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Letty wrote:

Heh! Heh! Francis is French and them frenchmen like to be different. Anyone can say, "Hit the nail ON the head".

It was very sweet and warmed my heart.

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Arthur wrote:

Francis wrote:
Arthur wrote:
Nice to meet ya 2!

You hit the nail in the head, Arthur!

hit the nail in the head? ouch! Could anyone explain what that means eh? is it one of the so called slangs?

Well, you could call it such. The correct word for that, however, is "proverb".

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Walter Hinteler wrote:

Arthur wrote:
Francis wrote:
Arthur wrote:
Nice to meet ya 2!

You hit the nail in the head, Arthur!

hit the nail in the head? ouch! Could anyone explain what that means eh? is it one of the so called slangs?

Well, you could call it such. The correct word for that, however, is "proverb".

Thanx Walter hinteler, for the correction, but what's the meaning of it??? thanx again.

Arthur Question

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Arthur, Walter is simply explaining that it's an expression used to describe a situation in which someone is exactly right. Haven't you ever hung a picture and hammered your thumb instead of the nail?<smile>That would NOT be "hitting the nail on the head."

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Please help me complete this English Love Poem
Regarder que vous avez commencé.

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Letty wrote:

Arthur, Walter is simply explaining that it's an expression used to describe a situation in which someone is exactly right. Haven't you ever hung a picture and hammered your thumb instead of the nail?<smile>That would NOT be "hitting the nail on the head."

ooops! oh thanx Letty. Now i understand it. I was misled. I did n't think the 'head' was the head of the nail. I thought it was the head of a person. haha. Sorry about that!

By the way haven't heard from you for a while Letty. How've ya been eh??

Arthur

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Well, Arthur, with the exception of a small residue of wine time, I'm fine.

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Letty wrote:

Well, Arthur, with the exception of a small residue of wine time, I'm fine.

That was a quick reply! Do you live online ? haha (just kidding)! Please forgive my poor english , but what does that mean?

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Actually, Arthur, I do spend a lot of time online, the reason being that I need to keep sharp and it's a release. Instead of grieving, I type.

I made the mistake of buying a domestic wine last evening, and the residue is still tucked somewhere in my synapses.

See what you started? <smile>. Coffee, however, is a marvelous panacea.

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Hit the nail on the head....

http://demoroom.physics.ncsu.edu/multimedia/images/demos/757Hit_Nail_on_Head.jpg

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