Please help me complete this English Love Poem

I'll give you
My eyes to measure disguise _____________________________
My nose to sense the white rose_________________________________
My lips_at your fingertips________________________________
My shoulders to cry on or to die on________________________________

I'll give you
My arms_to hold you so tender_____________________________________
My hands to hold in surrender_______________________________________
My legs to walk when you can't_________________________________________
My feet to march to your chant______________________________________
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I'll give you
...(you may add more)

that's a great poem , Letty
Hey, Letty

wooowww that was a great poem thanx.

Arthur, you're back. I'm glad that you liked my contribution, but I am happier that you decided to return after you inspired the Brat Brigade. Believe it, I was concerned about that. <smile>

Thanx Letty for still remembering me
Hiya Letty

I'm so touched that you are still remembering me after such a long time. Thanx for your help. I'm actually expecting more answers from all walks of life with different style of the poem. How can I invite more ppl to write on that topic.

Arthur

Arthur, you I would never forget. I tell you what, buddy. I'll post a link to your thread in the WA2K radio thread, and we'll see what happens.

Thanx Letty, I'm so touched
Thanx Letty,

It's very kind of you. I feel very warm here. That's the reason i come back here again. And lucky me. I meet you again

Arthur

I'll give you
My eyes to see your future so dear
My nose to smell the scents around
My lips to dry your lovely tear
My shoulders when pain is so sound

I'll give you
My arms to make you a nest
My hands if you need a caress
My legs to walk in your quest
My feet, my everything, yes!

Francis, that is lovely. You must do that in French as well for our Arthur.

I can't improve on Francis'. That's poetic, mon ami.

I'll give you
My eyes to look with wonder
My nose to shelter under
My lips to kiss you, through the night
And both my shoulders, left and right

I'll give you
My arms, is that dramatic?
My hands, though quite rheumatic
My legs, they reach the ground
My feet at least are sound
.
I'll give you all of me you see
As all of you I want for me
I'm sharing none with Mr Gore
That bald ex-cop who lives next door

Arthur, our Brit is being a brat. <smile>

However, it was quite good.

Francis and Mc Tag

that's really nice. thanx

I'll give you
My eyes to see you through the week
My nose to run all day
My lips to pump with collagen
My shoulders, 'til next May

I'll give you
My arms, 'cos then I'm 'armless
My hands (and fingers too)
My legs, as I don't jog a lot
My feet, called Reg and Lou.

I'll give you
My dog, who's rather smelly
My cat (complete with kittens)
My watch, my Aunty Nelly
My socks and woolly mittens

I'll give you
My mortgage, which is massive
My car, my vintage boat
My lifebelt, 'cos you'll need it
My vintage boat don't float

I'll give you
My wife complete with wardrobes
My offspring who are skint
My seven crates of whisky
My lighter (minus flint)

I'll give you
My collection of old papers
My box of screws and nuts
My four electric shavers
My two old water butts

And now.....
The only thing that I have left
Is a tin of old wood hardener
It's yours, only if you promise
To not run off with the Gardener.


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I could have added another verse, but the only word that rhymed in one line was rather rude.

I think that it's time for me to call it a night.

I'll give you
My eyes to gaze upon your beauty,
My nose to breathe your perfume,
My lips to kiss your body,
My shoulders to comfort you at night.

I'll give you
My arms to wrap you tightly,
My hands to caress your hair,
My legs to carry your burdens,
My feet to walk with you forever.

Tico, that was beautiful, Kansas.

Remember, Arthur, beware of the Brat Brigade. Well, you asked for things from all walks of life, and you got 'em, honey.

Thanks. I'm glad you think so, Letty.

<smile>

Re: Please help me complete this English Love Poem
I'll give you
My eyes to keep in pickle jars
My nose to hang from twine
My lips to dip in beer at bars
My shoulders to hold the wine.

I'll give you
My arms to stuff and use as lamps
My hands to snuff your smokes
My legs to press down all your stamps
My feet I'll give your folks.