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Comma or no comma?

 
 
Reply Sun 21 Feb, 2016 06:36 pm
Which of the following examples is correctly punctuated?

1) John sits in class, bored out of his mind. He begins fantasizing about his sexy, busty bookworm of a classmate Brandi.

2) John sits in class, bored out of his mind. He begins fantasizing about his sexy, busty bookworm of a classmate, Brandi.

In particular, is the comma needed after "classmate" and before "Brandi"?

Thank you.

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Reply Sun 21 Feb, 2016 08:22 pm
@paok1970,
I'd go with 1.

A comma after before the name "Brandi" isn't necessary.
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