@DNA Thumbs drive,
Well I said that I might put a comma after Tiara, to include a rational pause. However a sentence can change meaning, or be nonsensical, if it is taken out of the paragraph to which is part of, this is what context means. Why would you be puzzling over me? am I important to you for some reason?
I also ask my wife, who is a professional business editor. She said that she would write the sentence different, which does not make it grammatically wrong however.