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A Story told one sentence at a time

 
 
kickycan
 
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Reply Wed 2 Jun, 2004 11:32 pm
"No. NOOO!" Kicky shouts as they descend upon him and begin to beat him menacingly.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Wed 2 Jun, 2004 11:55 pm
Mrs. Otis shrieked, the capybara squealed, and the older gentleman rose from his seat menacingly.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 01:05 am
The menacing older gentleman said: "Miss Otis, for someone who refuses to meet me for lunch, you sure as hell get around."
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Vivien
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 01:26 am
Ms Otis turned quickly. her velvet gown swirling round her and drew a gun, how could I ever sink so low as to love a louse like you she cried raising her gun.
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kickycan
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 08:27 am
. . . menacingly.
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dyslexia
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 08:32 am
what Ms Otis had thought was a 25 auto turned out to be a Walther PPK and 3 rounds into the wall beside the senile gent sent plaster flying in all directions with the 4th round, following recoil, went into the ceiling.
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shewolfnm
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 08:35 am
As Ms Otis fixed her sights on his forhead, her current lover rolled from behind her in his gold wheel chair and said " Thats right...Its me LARRY FLINT !~ She refused to meet you for lunch because I took her on a ride and I fed her And I clothed her.. not you!!!!!""
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 09:24 am
Ms. Otis, Mrs. Otis, Ms. Otis, whatever, turned around and said, regretfully, "you golden rolling belly, get out of my way!!"
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shewolfnm
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 09:31 am
Ms Otis spinns around and shoots larry flint right in the head and 14 TONS of multi colored confetti sprays everywhere followed by a HORRIBLE stench of yellow cotton candy.








((( ? )))
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Diane
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 11:49 am
Ms. Otis regrets having lunch and the prospect of going to prison.
The yellow cotton candy had a stench that was disgutingly familiar. And Menacing.
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kickycan
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 11:54 am
Laughing
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 11:56 am
While they dragged Ms. Otis away to prison, her thoughts turned to how these stories are becoming strangely repetitive.
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shewolfnm
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:01 pm
Just as the repetiveness MENACINGLY struck her as funny...... Micheal jackson stormed through the door screaming " I didnt do...............
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shewolfnm
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:03 pm
Ok, I have an idea.. probally an awful one but...

What about a story one word at a time? Too much? Maybe?
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kickycan
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:06 pm
I was thinking about that yesterday! I think it's a great idea. Let's try it!


The
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:06 pm
Too much there...I think the one sentence thing is just fine. Mind you, I only speak for myself.
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shewolfnm
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:10 pm
Im kind of thinking it may be too much just ONE word at a time.....how about a compromise.... lets say 3 words at a time??? that way we dont have to scroll for thousands of pages just to get where we left off?
What do you think?
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kickycan
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:10 pm
Maybe Cav is right. I'd like to try it, but maybe we can do it on a new thread, and leave this one as it is, one sentence at a time. I'm going to start the one word thread in a little while though, just for kicks.


So who wants to start the next one?
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shewolfnm
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:14 pm
OOOHHH!!! Pick me ! Me Me !!
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kickycan
 
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Reply Thu 3 Jun, 2004 12:14 pm
'kay, now I'm not sure what we're doing. Are we going to try three words?
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