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Does "Would that my heart were pure as the moon in the sky" mean...?

 
 
Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2014 06:59 pm
Does "Would that my heart were pure as the moon in the sky" mean "Hope that my heart were pure as the moon in the sky"?

But the grammar of "hope that" is far easier to understand (verb + object). The grammar of "would that"? Hard! Does "would" serve as a verb? If so, why used the past tense of "will"?

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Life in the world is but a speck of dust,
Karma ordains all mortals' destiny.
If Karma rules, they why repine?
Would that my heart were pure as the moon in the sky!
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dlowan
 
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Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2014 07:33 pm
@oristarA,
Almost....it means I wish that my heart were as pure as the moon in the sky.
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Romeo Fabulini
 
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Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2014 07:52 pm
The moon used to be pure before the Apollo astronauts went there and left it looking like a junk yard including poop/pee bags..Wink
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contrex
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Reply Mon 21 Apr, 2014 12:06 am
"Would that" is a common poetic shortening of "I would that". "Would" is the subjunctive of "will" in its archaic meaning of "wish", and is used to imply a wishful or idealized alternative to an undesired reality.
McTag
 
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Reply Mon 21 Apr, 2014 02:00 am
@contrex,

And "were" is subjunctive of "was".

Mc(after the parade has passed)Tag
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oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 21 Apr, 2014 08:01 am
@oristarA,
Thank you guys.
There is a typo: they --->>> then:

Life in the world is but a speck of dust,
Karma ordains all mortals' destiny.
If Karma rules, then why repine?
Would that my heart were pure as the moon in the sky!
McTag
 
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Reply Mon 21 Apr, 2014 08:32 am
@oristarA,

I knew that.
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dlowan
 
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Reply Tue 22 Apr, 2014 03:57 am
@oristarA,
No, then in that context is not a typo.
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