Can anyone to check the correctness.?

Thanks for your assistance

Just a bit more help, if you don't mind.

Before saying anything, I would like to thank
all who showed their valuable presence on the great day.
I want to congratulate our veterans' winning team.
It was an excellent performance.
We had a lot of mistakes and misbehavior on the ground, but we prevailed in the end.
I hope that everyone realizes his or her own mistakes, but, again I would like to say "Well done, veterans' team.

Joe(Leave them with a positive statement)Nation

I am POSITIVE that Joe is right.





David

First, thanks to all who attended on that great day and congratulation to our winning Veterans' Team (apostrophe optional), an excellent performance. We made a lot of mistakes, however, not the least being (need adj here--what sort of impropriety, wrongdoing) misbehavior (in the ground????), which I hope everyone has realized in the meantime

Achu perhaps in your milieu one special kind of misbehavior is conducted only in the ground as opposed to on the surface or in the air; but many if not most of us aren't aware of the distinction

We had a lot of mistakes, including misbehavior in the ground where several members of Tunneling Team Fourteen wasted the entire afternoon burrowing Crawlway Thirty-Two...

Misbehavior was between the players due to a wrong decision.