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Reply Tue 28 Jan, 2014 05:04 am
Noticed that we have received plenty of players names who want to be part of our team. But most of them are not showing their passionate for practice and internal matches. To be frankly say that “this will not be entertain anymore “.
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Reply Tue 28 Jan, 2014 04:15 pm
@achu,

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Noticed that we have received plenty of players names who want to be part of our team. But most of them are not showing their passionate for practice and internal matches. To be frankly say that “this will not be entertain anymore “.


This could be better written:

(I notice that) We have received applications from plenty of players who want to be part of our team. But most of them have no enthusiasm for training and practice matches. This is no longer acceptable, and so these players will not be able to join.
achu
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jan, 2014 09:52 pm
@McTag,
Excellent..Thank you
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