Not sure the usages are correct or not

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I agree with you that keeping low key is a good tactic in the circumstances that are both fragile and vulnerable.

oristarA wrote:

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I agree with you that keeping low key is a good tactic in the circumstances that are both fragile and vulnerable.

"in circumstances that are" Don't need an article there.

For conciseness, you might say, "...in fragile and vulnerable circumstances."

Even better, since "fragile" and "vulnerable" are so similar in meaning, I would take one of them out.

There's another problem, though. Are the circumstances fragile and vulnerable or is the person? I think it would be best written, "in circumstances in which you are fragile and vulnerable."

My final edit would be, "in circumstances in which you are vulnerable."

If I were to write it in my own words, I would simply say, "when you are vulnerable." That's about as concise as I can make it.

The circumstances, like the conditions of China, where human rights are quite poor, are fragile and vulnerable.

Ori!! you know we need the content to give you the best answer . . .

I suggest:

In these fragile and vulnerable circumstances, I agree with you that keeping a low key is the best tactic.