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Romeo and Juliet Thesis Help?

 
 
sband
 
Reply Mon 1 Apr, 2013 01:49 pm
I need to write a persuasive essay about how Romeo and Juliet were merely infatuated with each other, and not truly in love. I need help with my thesis statement. Can you tell me which one sounds the best? Also, can you make some of your own thesis statements? That would really help ALOT!! Smile

1--- Although some people may argue otherwise, I believe that Romeo and Juliet were just infatuated with each other considering the way that Romeo quickly forgot his obsession with Rosaline, Romeo and Juliet fell in love while being mere acquaintances, and Romeo was just in love with being in love.

2----Although some people may argue otherwise, I believe that Romeo and Juliet were just infatuated with each other considering the way that Romeo quickly forgot about Rosaline when he saw how pretty Juliet was, Romeo and Juliet fell in love while being mere acquaintances, and Juliet was just flattered by the attention Romeo gave her.

I am not sure that my evidence is stated clearly in my thesis statements. Can you think of any other types of evidence as to why Romeo and Juliet were only infatuated with each other, and not truly in love? I don't want to be redundant and I don't want to use evidence in my statement that I cannot support and back up with quotes. I'm not sure if I can show strong proof in the rest of my essay to support all the evidence that I stated in the thesis. Can you please give me any suggestions, re-word my thesis statement, or write another thesis that would make more sense? Thank You!!
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timur
 
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Reply Mon 1 Apr, 2013 01:55 pm
As you are getting some feedback on other threads, just a bit of food for thought:

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Dear people who think Romeo and Juliet is a romantic story,
It was a relationship that lasted 3 days between a 13 year old and a 17 year old.
And it resulted in 6 deaths...
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Reply Sun 26 May, 2013 12:43 pm
@sband,
In essays, you should always try to avoid saying "I believe" or anything concerning yourself really. With the thesis's you've given, I believe a great thesis would be: Arguably, Romeo and Juliet were merely infatuated (not sure if you meant infactuated but either one you need I say) with each other, and were not truly in love.
There you go, simple as that. A thesis can be one sentence and more. If you're trying to include your subtopic point, just use the thesis I gave you and add at the end "because ...(subtopic point)..." to start off every one of your body paragraphs (not including introduction or the conclusion). I hope this helps!!! Smile
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