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ziawj2
 
Reply Mon 11 Mar, 2013 09:37 am
I wrote a message to my landlord. Please help me check it to make it natural. Thank you.

Dear John:


I’m sorry to hear that the telephone in my apartment does not work. It is advisable for you to take some measures to solve the problem. I’m look forward to your replying as soon as possible.


Sincerely yours,
Lily
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 11 Mar, 2013 11:36 am
@ziawj2,
I’m sorry to report my telephone doesn't work but please take action as soon as possible.
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DrewDad
 
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Reply Mon 11 Mar, 2013 11:40 am
@ziawj2,
John,

I wanted to let you know that my phone isn't working. Can you have someone take a look at it?

Thanks,

Lily (aparment ####)
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 11 Mar, 2013 11:58 am
@ziawj2,
(Sorry to bother you [at this unseeming hour] Jim but) My phone isn't working


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