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Is this sentence awkward?

 
 
Reply Tue 18 Dec, 2012 10:08 am
The sentence: This phenomenon has been conceptualised within a framework of memories being reactivated and then reconsolidated in repeated rounds of cellular processing.

I read it repeatedly and failed to get a crystal clear conception. And you?

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The retrieval of a memory places it into a plastic state, the result of which is that the memory can be disrupted or even enhanced by experimental treatment. This phenomenon has been conceptualised within a framework of memories being reactivated and then reconsolidated in repeated rounds of cellular processing. The reconsolidation phase has been seized upon as crucial for the understanding of memory stability and, more recently, as a potential therapeutic target in the treatment of disorders such as post-traumatic stress and drug addiction. However, little is known about the reactivation process, or what might be the adaptive function of retrieval-induced plasticity. Reconsolidation has long been proposed to mediate memory updating, but only recently has this hypothesis been supported experimentally. Here, the adaptive function of memory reconsolidation is explored in more detail, with a strong emphasis on its role in updating memories to maintain their relevance.

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http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0166223609001027
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Tue 18 Dec, 2012 04:32 pm
@oristarA,
No, yes, Ori, it's hardly crystal clear
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Reply Tue 18 Dec, 2012 04:51 pm
@oristarA,
Complex langauge for a beginner, but not incomprehensible. And not bad English either. Sometimes (as in this case) the incomprehension is not the writer's fault.

Memory is in a plastic (changeable) state - it can be disrupted or enhanced by experimental treatment.

This phenomenon (previously mentioned) has been conceptualised (thought of or interpreted) within a (explanatory) framework of memories being reactivated and then reconsolidated in repeated rounds of (brain) cellular processing.

dalehileman
 
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Reply Tue 18 Dec, 2012 05:26 pm
@contrex,
Your Average Clod (me) will ever respond that if it can't be said in fewer and more common terms it leaves one with a feeling of vagueness
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